*dodo*: 7 Report post Posted April 27, 2005 awww thanx :bl i hope your not teasing me. i dont usaully share any of my writtings but for some reason i felt like writting in bia2 tonight. :bl Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pourya 216 Report post Posted April 27, 2005 I can assure you that I am not! And I feel privileged having the opportunity to read your beautiful piece! :k Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
*dodo*: 7 Report post Posted April 27, 2005 awwww thanx :bl your word means alot to me :bl Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
khanoomi: 0 Report post Posted April 28, 2005 thanx i just wrote it on the spot right then and there. so if it doesnt make sense. sowwy. :bl it has its own meaning to me. 76544[/snapback] wooooooooooooow jeedi meegi khely bahal bood khanoom vaghan khely ghashang bood va it totally makes sense hun :k Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
khanoomi: 0 Report post Posted April 28, 2005 I can assure you that I am not! And I feel privileged having the opportunity to read your beautiful piece! :k 76553[/snapback] yeah me 2 dodo jan va i hope u show more of ur work hun Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
shazdeh_khanom: 0 Report post Posted April 28, 2005 u gooooooooooooo girlfriend!! :worshippy: :worshippy: :worshippy: :worshippy: veryyyyyyyyyyy veryyyyyyyyyyyyyy niceeeeeeeeeee indeed!!!! hope u share more of ur poems with us here :k :k :k what if i was lostwhat if i was found what if i died tonight what if i suffered for eternety what if i loved before what if i never loved what if i could lust what if i had no passion what if tommorow never came what if today was my last what if my eyes couldnt tear what if my hands could never write what if my dreams were shattered what if i could never heal what if i was numb what if i could never die would i still be me or just my mind. would my heart go on or will it die through it all will my soul be me. 76536[/snapback] Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
*dodo*: 7 Report post Posted April 28, 2005 awwwwwwwwwww :bl khejalatam dadeen guys. thanx so much. :bl :bl :bl Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DonYaA: 1 Report post Posted April 28, 2005 WOW Dodo!!! It was a amazing poem!! Keep up the excellent work ;) :k :k :k Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Cactus Jack: 2 Report post Posted April 29, 2005 Roses are red, Violets are blue, I like spaghetti, Wanna F*ck? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
~cinderella~: 0 Report post Posted April 29, 2005 ..:: ::.. Love Means ..:: ::.. ..A girl and guy were speeding (on a motobike) over 100 mph on the road.. Girl: Slow down. Im scared. Guy: No this is fun. Girl: No its not. Please, its 2 scary! Guy: Then tell me u love me. Girl: Fine, I love u. Slow down! Guy: Now give me a BIG hug. *Girl hugs him* Guy: Can u take my helmet off & put it on? Its buggin me. ~ In the paper the next day: A motorcycle had crashed into a building because of break failure. ~ 2 ppl were on it but only 1 survived. The truth was that halfway down the road, the guy realizd that his breaks had broken, but he didn't want 2 let the girl know. ~ Instead, he.. ...had her say she loved him & felt her hug 1 last time, then had her wear his helmet so that she would live even though it meant that he would die Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
khanoomi: 0 Report post Posted April 29, 2005 :c that is soooooooo cute thanx for posting that cinderella jan Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
shazdeh_khanom: 0 Report post Posted April 30, 2005 awwwwwww, that's sooooooooooooooooooo sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeetttt pureeeeeeeeee loveeeeeeeeeeeee ive got tears in my eyes :c :c :c thanx alot Cinderella joon Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Keano 199 Report post Posted April 30, 2005 Very touching story, though I doubt the legitimacy of it! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
shazdeh_khanom: 0 Report post Posted April 30, 2005 dont be so cynical hun :no: :no: these things do exist :DD :DD not everyone thinks that love is the slowest form of suicide :t :t :t Very touching story, though I doubt the legitimacy of it! 77185[/snapback] Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Keano 199 Report post Posted April 30, 2005 Well, believe it or not I am one of the most romantic and loving guys ever, although when you're riding a bike with a high speed, and you realize that your brakes aren't functioning, you just won't have time to demonstrate all those dialogue!!! I used to bike alot and I know what I am talking about! that whole conversation would easily take 2 minutes, nevertheless it's not practical! My 2 cent... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
~cinderella~: 0 Report post Posted April 30, 2005 im glad that u guys liked it Eshq ra ba hich tasviri nemitavan neshan dad, vali ham-e dar zehn-e khod tasviri az Eshq darand... Pas ghab-e khali-e ghesehye Eshq ro ba tasavorat (khaterat???) khod por konid. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
~cinderella~: 0 Report post Posted April 30, 2005 rasti keano jan whats with ur signiture?? i mean what is it? lol :DD hehehehe Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
khanoomi: 0 Report post Posted April 30, 2005 im glad that u guys liked it Eshq ra ba hich tasviri nemitavan neshan dad, vali ham-e dar zehn-e khod tasviri az Eshq darand... Pas ghab-e khali-e ghesehye Eshq ro ba tasavorat (khaterat???) khod por konid. 77226[/snapback] very well said :k Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
*dodo*: 7 Report post Posted May 8, 2005 sitting here thinking about what life can be, what love can be what i can be, makes no sence to me, i want to be more then i can be but you want me to be what i cant be i want to be the world to you but you dont what that world to be yours i want you to hold me, breath me, passion me but you want me to hold still and never move i want you to crave me but you never do what do i do do i hold it down or do i move Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pourya 216 Report post Posted May 8, 2005 wow!! such a delicate little piece! manifest of emotions! I love it!! :k Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
*dodo*: 7 Report post Posted May 8, 2005 thanx pourya, :bl :bl :bl :bl :bl Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pourya 216 Report post Posted May 8, 2005 u r most welcome my dear!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
khanoomi: 0 Report post Posted May 10, 2005 dodo jan i really enjoyed reading that poem and i think that u r really talented hun :DD Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
